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i tire...

alone i fall like a leaf unnoticed
the dizzying heights i might have known
just forgotten vistas now viewed from below
as i silently fall unknown to the bed
of forgotten tragedy and silence.

i rot here at the foot of the shell
that once was me towering over the landscape
tolerating everything that tried to bring me down
knowing i was stronger than the hate nearby
but here i fall and succumb to the dark
as i tire of the struggle and fail
to mean something anymore.

it hurts to be nothing here in the dark
to know that all of the toil has been for naught
as if i was forced back into this world after dieng
just so the dark could have a few more laughs
and make me the living punchline
of its sick dark joke when
i should just be dead.

and so i quietly protest
why me?

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  • Darkwell
    October 7

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    amazing

    i dont know any body else who can capture despair and evil better then you. just brillient!


    • DevilHimself silver member
      October 7
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      you are too nice! i stole the last line from you because i thought it made sense and was a tribute to you as well... hope you dont mind but i did think you would be cool with it...
      -dev