My element is water
Emotional in nature.
I am generous and intuitive
Empathic and extremely sensitive.
Highly evolved as a spirit refined
My karma is to nurture all the signs.
Malleable.
Adaptable.
Changes are easily aligned
If another’s terms meet mine.
Soothing to the soul and heart
Absorb emotions end to start.
I reflect the changing moon,
High to low are my moods.
I love music and live to write,
Write to live in love and light.
A recluse am I at times
Energies edge the fine lines,
Betwixt and between
In twilight foreseen.
My creativity flows
As midnight hour glows.
Stillness and mystery
Are my best sensory.
A sentimental fool
Seldom mean or cruel,
Positive energy I send
Fiercely loyal as a friend.
A photographic memory
Of facts and kindness shown to me,
Well read and philosophical
My instinct theosophical.
I love completely
Ever so deeply,
Loving without conditions
Abundance my ambition.
I am Cancer,
Nurturer of the Zodiac.
Author notes
"I am universe, I am life"
DragonBlue 
GRAPHIC CREDIT:
http://hoihoisan.deviantart.com/art/Zodiac-Cancer-13421718
MODIFIED IN FRAME BY:
DragonBlue
A contest entry
- Zodiac Contest by XXVampireeyesXX.
700 points, ended November 8, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very well done
This is a truly great read and keep up the good work
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I love completely
Ever so deeply,
Loving without conditions
Abundance my ambition.
I know this all to be true,
my eternal friend,
My Dragon of Blue.
Loved this DB, Feel it in your heart, for all of this is who you are and so much more,
You are universe...you are life.
~E.
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~E - aka PR
Your reply to my pen brought tears to my eyes as you would know me this well. I am happy you enjoyed this as I enjoyed your rhyming stanza at the end.
You flatter me with "you are universe...you are life" though. I am just a small part of the universe and of life in the endless circle of becoming human as a free spirit of light and energy in this every-changing world in which we survive.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my work. Love and Light to you sister, in every shade and hue of the color blue!
Namaste~
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DragonBlue
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wow.. this is a very personal/ informative poem! I like your simple rhyme and the way you influenced yourself into it, it seems very raw and I love that.
I also like the BG even though cance ain't my sign lol I love the structure of it... it sets some mood to the reader... nicely done! thanks for entering! -
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Thank you
for reviewing and commenting on my work. I enjoyed creating the background and writing the pen as it was an internal exploration again, which all of us should visit several times a year. Anyway, have a great day!
Blessed Be~
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DragonBlue
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im a proud aquarius!
but a little constructive sritisism never went unwanted in my books. Be carefull with your syllable count (excuse any mispellings).
If the syllable count is out or irregular it can throw of the rhythm of the poem for the reader.
however on a lighter note, I never said I didn't enjoy reading this poem. You've turned something I normally fing quite boreing, and made it not only interesting, but quite deep and entertaining!
Bravo!
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Thank you
for reading and commenting on my work. Just an FYI, I did count the syllables before posting my pen to this contest and ran spell/grammar check, then proofed it again, after putting it down for 2 hours. I know I have a habit of using words with 2 to 3 syllables and in the next line will use 2 to 3 single syllable words to the same count. It is acceptable to do so according to my 'poetry bible' but others sometimes find it difficult to keep the rhythm while reading it.
Thank you again for your kind words and for the rabbit ears. Have a great day!
Blessed Be~
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DragonBlue
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This is really well done, I love how you captured the sign without sounding like another trite rundown of traits and abilities. Somehow you made it bothe symbolic and melodic. Wonderful write!
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Thank you
for taking the time to review my work and commenting about what you liked about it. Have a great day!
Blessed Be~
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DragonBlue
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nice ... I never could write anything about a personality
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thanks
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A friend of mine is a Cancer. She's great to me. I'm a Capricorn. I watch her financial and general business back, she watches my best interest.
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Thank you
for your comments.
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db
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