Trembling hand clutched bulb,
carefully pushed into a planter
growing pansies.
Pulled robe about herself,
wondered back inside.
death came in sleep
deep in wintertime.
Lover found the tulip,
as Spring came softly in,
warm,red
bending with the wind.
knelt beside the planter
showered love with tears.
Touch me back.
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Soft
A soft gentle feel I got from this pc. Imagery the best.
wrapping of robe about herself. planting the bulb. Lover finding tulip and spring. A showered love with tears. Nice poem.
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great imagery
Touching story, very nice job here poetess!
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it seems like such a careless gesture in its way and yet look what yield it returns.
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wonderful
Very creative and so well done. A terrific write and very well expressed. Thank you for sharing.
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Very touching. I love the imagery in this tender poem!
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Your words always mean alot to me. Thank you John.
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I love the image of pulling the wrap around herself and the lover at the planter, you have as always some very vivid images in your poetry.
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Hi sissy!!! Thank you
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Very Discriptive & Well Penned
very well written and thought out Rheea. I love the way you bring it all together.I can almost feel the tears that Lover feels...Keep on writing you have a knack for it.........LovinCharmer
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