She has that kind of
a smile that burns in your mind
like a crescent moon
in a starless sky
which swiftly brands your psyche
with phosphorescence
and just will not fade
but illuminates the whole
of the night & day.
In a list
A contest entry
- The lucky number ten and still counting (invite only) by Meroza.
1500 points, ended October 17, 5 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A smile like that ...she must be American. Phosphorecent huh, must be brushing with incendiary toothpaste. Could be a useful mate when electrics are down but a bit attention getting at night. Some trick to illuninate the day from one's mouth. Does it hang open much? Wow! this is so romantic, you ol' softy.
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Well a/ She is Norwegian & b/ She does have a beautiful smile & c/ A beautiful woman always brightens my day up. Meroza's smile certainly does! (I am a bit of a softy deep down ... don't let stereotypes of the English fool you ...)
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Excellent, like the smile you describe!
I find these lines really brilliant...
"a smile that burns in your mind
like a crescent moon
in a starless sky
which swiftly brands your psyche
with phosphorescence..."
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Thanks ashjoe, I think I broke my dryspell for a bit. I don't think I would have spelled phosphorescence without the spell checker LOL
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"Who can turn the world on with her smile?" Besides Mary Tyler Moore - now there's Meroza!
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Who's Mary Tyler Moore?
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lol
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This really flows perfectly. Excellent!
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This is so light and lovely, a light indeed. You CAN sing, after all!
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You've obviously never heard me sing in the bath!
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You silver-tongued devil! Excellent write!
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It's a gift ...
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Great Tofu!
Meroza's smile is exactly just like this!
You did your tofu proud & I could just gobble this up 'cause you added all the finesse & spice that it needs to make it yummy! 
All the best in this contest! Glad to see your entry! 
I don't know how Meroza can't help but being totally allured by this piece! 
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Well ... I don't often enter competitions, but she has such a lovely smile, I thought it was worth it!
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Wow, This is like, I haven't read anything like this before. Oh my, I hope I ain't keeping you awayke at nights
I surely hope so!
Wow, an amazing entery and I'm so glad you asked to join. This sure was worth the spot! Best of luck!
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Thanks
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