Empty

He's coming closer,
my hearts pounding.
i try to run,
he grabs me.
his hands rub my body,
violating me.
inside i'm screaming,
wishing he'd stop.
i try to push him away,
he won't leave.

he says its time.
he undresses me,

his body presses against mine.
silent tears fall down my face.
my innocence,
its gone.
Now i'm left,
empty.

What did you think

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DeSiBoO14
October 13

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iTs SoO SaD dAt U hAd 2Go ThReW dAt!!But...dIs Is A vErY gUd WrItE!!i LyKd It!!CHeCk Out mY poeMs 2!!..
a lOvE lOsT
October 10
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i like it but maybe little more detail on next rape or abue poem ..i didnt feel your pain.
peregrin
October 9

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I can relate to this physically and mentally. It is a hard thing to write about... Great job here.
This is fantastic.
Sir Squigglim
October 8

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well, I thought that was pretty amazing! It was basically to the point (sometimes suspense in rape poetry is too much...)

You left a very good first impression! Good Job!