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You...

I hear you.
I feel you.
I love you.
I care for you.
I thought you cared for me too.
You ended up lieing.
I ended up crying.
All you ever wanted to do was play with me.
You just want me to believe everythings okay.
Your lies have been consuming me.
I don't believe in anyone besides the people that care for me.
If you think your gonna screw me over.
Think again.
I've been through it.
I've done it.
I've stopped it.
There's no point anymore.
You had me on chains.
One moment,
you released me with pain.
With no thought,
I just ran into the darkness,
yelling and cutting.
I can hear you say
"Don't worry, it'll all be okay."

Author notes

I used to LOVE this one girl. And well. It was all a joke.

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  • AnGeL WiNgS
    October 8
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    wow

    I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM I REALLY LIKE IT IT MEANS SOMETHING TO ME IMA READ IT ALOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • AnGeL WiNgS
    October 8

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    Nice

    I know what you mean iv been in love and was screwed over tons by him!!!! my personal opinion -- I dont need him cus im getting treated better!! Dont worry bout revising it came from your heart and thats all that matters. KEEP UP THE WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • poptartxpunk
    October 8
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    OH SNAP!

    Dayum!
    Keep on penning mkay!?
    I like your style.