Who the fuck do you think you are?
You really push me way too far
What...who? gives you the fucking right
Feelings of anger...you incite
Take that damn smug look off your face
As a human you're a disgrace
One day soon you'll get what's coming
Wait and see...you'll be succumbing
You make me sick you fucking prick
I'd like to hit you with a brick
You stand there looking oh so smug
I'd like to see your grave be dug.
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Wow, okay so that is a bit violent and profanity-filled lol. It is impressive when you consider that you said you weren't mad when you wrote it. It certainly sounds like you were! And I like the brick part, it made me giggle.
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Wow. That's all I can say! As I look more and more through your poetry the more I admire your work. You said that you weren't even angry when you wrote this! It seems rather convincing to me!
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Thanks and no, I wasn't angry at all 
Sometimes I wish I was that assertive tho 
Once again thanks for taking the time to read my poems 
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Dang... Talk about venom! Well stated rant!
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Yeah! Stick a lit firecracker up his arse and see how smug he is then!
Fun, though effectively insulting and angry piece.
Good write.
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Thanks for your great comment and applause. I appreciate it
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Well, well, well. Its obvious that you can get your dander up at times with the right provocation. Direct , to the point and in plain language. Well spoken.
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If only I WAS that assertive I'm not sure how I managed to make this so convincing. I wasn't even angry or upset when I penned it 
Thanks for your comment and applause
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Great rhymes, and I think I should memorize this one-- such a good curse at the end. Well written!
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Thank You
I'm pleased that you liked this poem. Thanks for taking the time to read it and for your comment and applause 
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Wow a very powerful and deep write!1 Great job of expressing your feelings!!Very excellent details and descriptions!1This is a marvelous piece!1 I love it!!
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Thank You
Thanks for taking the time to read my poem I appreciate your comment
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Damn! Damn!
This Fuckin Rocks my Ass!
Yeah! I can feel the raw anger
This kinda stimulated my mind and it was such a pleasure to read this one out here…
I like this ? uhhhm …… I LOVED IT!
Hey this is very well written.. it flows so well, I like the rhyming…very well written and laid out, I think the words you have used really suits this poem and I find no faults in this…
You did a good job with this… I loved it!
I enjoyed reading…
This was worth it!
Great Write!
Shuberth (I’m a Rhyming Poet!)
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Thank You
I appreciate your comment and happy
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Woah, powerful hate. But nice, can't wait to use it for someone deserving of it. Then again...maybe its better to not hate someone so....
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Thanks for taking the time to read my poem I wish I was
able to be that assertive sometimes I appreciate your
comment and applause
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I've SHO had this feeling before! You worded it in an awesome way!
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You tell 'im, Cuz! Glad you don't really have a guy like this in your life anymore... wheeeeeew!
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Thanks Cuz !
Yep...I'm sure glad that I don't either Thanks for
taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate your comment
and happys too
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hehe.. very angry, a side to you i havent seen much. but great peice AP mum =]
keep writting...
luv u
xoxoxoxox
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I wish I could muster up the courage to be more like
this one In theory I'm just a wuss Thank you
for your comment and applause. Love you 2 xxxxx
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Fantastic
Oh Julie,this is fantastic.i have a grin from ear to ear at the moment.you have penned this so well and man, how I can relate to those words!I love the border back ground, did you design it yourself? i dont know how many times I call my husband an asshole lol he even calls himself that! These words that you have penned were my exact thoughts on the man that took my mums life.This write just has to be a winner, in my eyes it's already taken the gold.
I wish you all the best in the contest my friend.
Much love and happiness to you.
Anne
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Thank You
I'm pleased you could relate to this one
I wish I was assertive enough to be like it
in real life Tha scary part is that I
wasn't even angry when I penned it
The background does go well with it doesn't
it It is by abear, and I'm not sure
if she is still on AP...or has changed her
author name
I DID credit her in
my author notes, but then went searching for
her again, but couldn't find her
Thanks so much for your comment and applause.
I appreciate it greatly
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I wish I could say this to a lot of people I know.
Good luck in the contest ♥
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Thank You
I wish I could too
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Superb plus
Wow, a powerful write. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.
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Thank You
Thanks for taking the time to read my poem I appreciate
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You are quite welcome.
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Wow! I thought this poem was great. Straight to the point and said exactly what you needed to say. I think if i were that bloke, i would be heading for cover now. A damned good write with excellent flow and rhythm. I don't often see poems on here with such a straight out write, but it did fit the bill to a tee. Hope there isn't someone out there that prompted this. Loved it. No need for any corrections at all.
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Luckily it wasn't aimed at anyone
I wish I were
that assertive sometimes It was purely for the contest
requirements and I wasn't even angry when I wrote it
Thanks for you comment and applause I hope that you
don't think I write this sort of stuff all the time
I appreciate your comment and applause and thanks for taking
the time to read my poem
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OH!!! Julie.. can I hire you to take on some of the people I know and am really pissed at? you're sooooooo
good at it!!!! everytime I want to express my anger that way I get choaked up in my own fear! but you!!!!
you let it roll right off your
I believe you may have a new career ahead! of course I'd have to pay you in bananas cause we're about broke. why Bananas?
hubby bought way too many the other day and I'm in a banana glut.
doc
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Thanks Doc. It's a pity that if it came to giving someone such a good mouthful of abuse
I wouldn't have the guts 
I thank you for the offer of bananas, but unfortunately I wouldn't be able to do it if it came
down to it
Thanks for your comment and happys
PS If I do manage to find that side of my personality somewhere I'll let you know ASAP
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wow very good take on the prompt. nice job. good luck in the contest and thanks for commenting on mine!
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Damn glad I didn't do it. I swear I was right here, when did it happen? sweet and the hits just keep on coming. You better win or else, Boog
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Sheeeesh Man...I have her sitting beside me now
and I'm shutting the hell up about everything in
case I get her Heckles Up
Love ya work mate
Linda (Her Cuz for real)
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Hmmmm...imagine what I could do if I was actually angry
Thanks for commenting Boog I like the happy s too
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i really love this! you are an amazing writer!
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Thank you I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read it.
I appreciate your comment and applause
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A lot of anger you display here, one would wish to never confront you for fear of such anger. That's what I get from this write, I'm sure that's not how you really are. One writes what they feel at the time and you did well to show the anger in this piece.
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Thank You
Sometimes I wish I COULD get that angry Not sure where it came from
Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate your comment
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I haven't read a poem that made me laugh this much in a long time! Thanks for the inspiration, now I have no chhoice but to enter the contest!!!!!!
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thank you I'm not quite sure where it came from There isn't anyone who it was directed at and I wasn't even pissed off when I wrote it I'm glad that it inspired you and I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment
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I love angry, pissed off poems And this was one of them, and it rhymed aswell! I don't see that every day I thought that this was well written, and I loved the line:
I'd like to hit you with a brick
Lol, man I wouldn't want to get on the bad side of you A great write!
Best of luck in the contest!
Take care
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Thank You
I'm not even and angry type person It just seemed to come out of nowhere
I'm pleased that you liked my poem and thank you for your comment and applause
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WOW
For sure meets the contest criteria. Well you inspired me to enter, like can I top this? Well any way good luck. And I actually feel what you are saying becaue there are some people like that in this world hopefully know too close to us. I agree with all of it except the very last line. I really wouldn't want to see no one dead but hey good write and good luck!!!
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Thank You
Thanks for taking the time to read this I'm pleased it inspired you to enter I must say that I wouldn't wish ANYONE dead...it was just for the purpose of the contest. I wasn't even angry or pissed off when I wrote it
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Remind me never to piss you off sis
I love the poem and your ability to rhyme so effortlessly gets me every time.
Best of luck in the contest
Love you sis
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Thanks sis Dunno where it came from I wasn't even angry when I wrote it thanks for your comment and happy s
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Ohhh such madness among us brave ones!!!!
I loved this one very much, especially the part:
Take that damn smug look off your face
As a human you're a disgrace
One day soon you'll get what's coming
Wait and see...you'll be succumbing
Haha nice, so true so true.
The ending was just like getting punched in the face (in a good way!) Because it just added a twist with a little dose of dark humor added but without going over the top.
And a little hint of seriousness.
Good luck in the contest
Oh and i loved the background for this to, it fits.
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Thank You
I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem Glad you liked it and I appreciate your comment and applause
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