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Condemned

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I wake from a terrible dream
to see the worlds come undone
words of passion just for me,
never meant a thing

Just a joke,
so laugh off your ass
in the end,
we'll see whose laughing

Angers raging
tears are flowing
I believed in you,
and you , and you

Now all I see
are disguises worn
All I see
are masks after masks

Show the true you
let it out
why, try to hide what's
visible

Eyes shown through
torn holes of your costume
is enough for one
to see the inner shell

VACANT----

Cobwebs woven
occupants left without notice
abandoned by owner
emptiness, its best friend

You stripped the contents--

All that remains: ( a sign that reads)

Trespassers will be PROSECUTED

CONDEMNED, do to be torn down within 48 hours!

 

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Yea what the hell ever

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  • sheltered
    October 18

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    this sounds like me
    hard to see beyond the surface
    yet I believe communication
    is the key to any relationship
    and honesty is the tumbler


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 9
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    Such hurt comes through, and such truth, terrific poetry here.


    Great stuff.


  • limitededition
    October 9

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    So much hurt coming through, such bitterness--but the truth be told our goodnes lives on in our children, family, and friends.
    We can't change the past-we can turn about for the here and now, thus the future.


  • princess Jewelcat22
    October 8
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    This is very deep and emotional sis!! Excellent job expressing your feelings!!

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 8

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    I agree!! Why must people mask who they are and deceive?!

    I am who I am and that's that!!

    Fantastic but sad write...


    ♥

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