I stand alone
In this field is where you left me,
I have gone old
I still remember the minute you left.
You walked away without turning back
Not one word said.
I want to chase after you,
but you just left me alone and desprate.
Keep me here,
I think I can go without you,
If you come back,
I won't move at all,
I will just look at the feet print you left.
I want to run back
I won't
I have grown on the years,
I haven't eaten,
I am ready to die,
Happy I will go
But I hope you come back
At least,
Once more
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Again.... by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended October 14, 31 entries
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A pained write, longing for closure, simply a glance for the rear view to accept ... The punctuation was a bit erratic, though I am one of those 'none at all or go all the way' people. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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Wow, amazing poem. Very visual, nice crisp clear description of feeling!
Loved it.
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LIKE THIS ONE TOO!!!!
THESE ARE GREAT POEMS
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