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What a great childhood!

Yay!!! Were going to the park!!!
Swings, slides, on a nice breezy day.
The local park is usually slightly full,
But today is the day my dad took off work,
To be with me, and have some time with me,
This was one of the best days.
As I grew older.
I started being sadded quickly,
I started yelling at my parents to let me go somewhere.
They tried to keep me contained,
I started thinking they didn't want me.
But, I learned something something,
They did care for me,
but now, THEY want to do suicide
They say their life is horrible with me!
Now, I live with a new family,
I feel alone,
No siblings,
Fosters always out,
I wish my real parents were still here...

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Not related to me. But, I hope you like it and understand peoples lives.

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  • AnGeL WiNgS
    October 14

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    wow

    hun this poem is deep. very deep that is so sad but you did an excellent write keep this up it was very sad tho to think your parents dont want you