I lay here
The heat radiates
traveling through the glass
Although you are miles away
you infuse me... in the most delicious way
My core feels your presence
It fills my soul
I stretch to allow more
growing from within
I lay here
Hoping this day will never end
A contest entry
- Show me how much you love... by MALikiethelastONE.
1000 points, ended October 31, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ooooohhhh!! :D
So simple, and yet so vivid! I love it! Thanks and Best of luck!
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Very Beautiful
Your words touch my heart. Sometimes it is so hard to love someone far away. The heart knows no distance. Your words take me there.Thank you for sharing.
Take care,
Sandy
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What an elegant poem, very simple but so much imagery, i can tell you long for your absent love, but are content bc you are always thinking of the
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