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Love..YOU

Self LOVE..just a  rumor? let it  be
They 'indented' your mind cause they hatin' see
"Just Who the blazes you think you gonna be?"
Entertain that image in a mirror..BREAKIN' free..

Self hate..they use words to berate
Come-uppance on the way, it lies in wait
Foul intended, yet unseen like a 'blind' date
Determined one.. positive future looks great..

Don't allow the contempt of a fool
Toss aside your dreams, you're no garden tool
Answers never easy, when questions are mired in muck
Be wary of all that bull!*&%#!?! ..watchout!! DUCK!

Self R.E.S.P.E.C.T. Aretha said it best
Student of life..
This is that 24/7, 365 days.."MUST PASS test"
Laid out like FOOD..chew slowly, easier to digest
Mix n' match what you need and set aside the rest..   

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 16

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    Great piece here

    I was told once figure out what you love to do the most that you are very good at and be the best at it and life will be pleasurable .Try to do everything to please everyone nd you shall fail and be good at nothing


    • Swangrnv gold member
      November 15
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      how did i..

      miss this comment? so shamed, and so thankful!
  • I think the way you worded this is amazing. Great epiphanies.

    • Swangrnv gold member
      October 9
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      Thanks!

      Iappreciate your positive feedback and your continued support my friend!
  • Melrose
    October 9
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    Sage advice...

    Your ability to uplift and inspire with your words and insight is truly a gift.


    • Swangrnv gold member
      October 9
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      aaww..

      Thank you so much my friend! I appreciate all your support!

  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 9
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    Thank you, Swan


    • Swangrnv gold member
      October 9
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      You are welcome..

      To offer whatever encouragement I can, well it's the least I can do for such nice and caring lady!

  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 9
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    This is a great inspirational poem Swan!!! You NEVER cease to amaze me!!!


    • Swangrnv gold member
      October 9
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      Thank you

      Wow I'm so sorry I stopped amazing you! l.o.l. I'll try harder next time! (just fooling around! l.o.l. don't hurt me! )
  • wow knuckle head you are a beast gesh i so love this hon and yes it is inspirational indeed


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 8
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    Ya I hope it does and that is all I have to say on this one! Oh! good write though


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 8

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    Nah dont help,

    But I know you love me and thanks for this actually many could use it, and I am one of them.

    Great job.
    Love ya

    Passions


    • Swangrnv gold member
      October 8
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      L.O.L.

      You certainly have a great sense of humor..and god knows, much wisdom! appreciate your never-ending support my friend!
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