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Tree of Knowledge

Buried under soils of facts
Water of life poured from above
Waiting for it to react
So it did and became a tree
Of knowledge

Author notes

Prompt:
25 words
"Seeds burst for any new sapling to grow,
as far as my limited knowledge knows." - Mark Griffin

in the last line i said stupidity, but i really meant ignorace...but if i said ignorace it wouldnt rhyme...so...yeah...
honestly, i think this poem SUCKS

(original:A little seed fell from sky into the soil of facts,
Water of life poured from above
Seeing if would ever react
The seed became a tree
One we all came to love
Spreading knowledge to stupidity)

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  • The Fun House gold member
    October 12

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    This actually makes alot of sense. I like it and you did well on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.

  • markgrif gold member
    October 8
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    An original take.

  • jcat gold member
    October 8

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    I agree with Jacks!!! You did a great job here...never underestimate your talent!!! Best wishes.....


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 8

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    We can become buried under much confusion in this life.. and that watering from above can truely help us clear the way to growth!

    Very nicely done!