Gripping each barbed word,
while malefic poison dances
over each ripple.
Freezing my soul,
incomprehensible...
...mind splinters.
Shards of shattered dreams
cascade broken reflections of us,
a never landing dust.
Author notes
Credit artist: http://pekthong.deviantart.com/art/serenity-70698374
A contest entry
- Quickie? by kiwigirljacks.
525 points, ended October 9, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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and gold is what you deserve for this sensational peice
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Now this is the shit.
I can still see the dust settling.
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Awesome gold. another prompt I would be lost on. Well done.
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Wow
I love this and I am glad to see that it has won gold. Congratulations it is an amazing piece love you 
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I am speechless!!!! You are perfection personified!! Wonderful job and congrats mi amiga!!
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Shattered dreams can often be incomprehensible can't they? "never landing dust" love that! Powerful take!
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wow.. this was really intense.. you did a great job! best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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wow.. way to freeze the soul!
Awesome work!
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