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Burning Heart

I feel its grip,
  Upon my mind,
    Its strength beyond belief.

I cry in vein,
  Pray to God,
    Please, give me some relief.

Familiar web of darkness,
  Lies in wait for me,
    For time distorts...

      Reality.

what emotions was she feelings at the moment

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  • maktub
    October 9

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    Another great write...
    favorite lines:

    "For time distorts...

    Reality."

    I've been there and can completely relate.
    Well done.
    Smile♫


    • Kandace
      October 9
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      thank you for your comments. This one helped me out a bunch