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Willow Tree

strong wind blows
yellow leaves are falling
this tree is crying

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 31
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    Great personification in this haiku--it sometimes does seem like the willow is crying!


  • jasminerose gold member
    October 14

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    Oh such a beautiful Haiku, your imagery is lovely and wonderful emotion too,
    Excellent!
    Jasminerose


  • MargaretG silver member
    October 14

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    This is a very clear image, as the wind blows leaves from the tree. I get a sad feeling from that too. Nicely done.


  • XRainbowliciousX
    October 12
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    I think that you could use maybe a couple more lines..but other than that..nice job.


    • Candy6
      October 12
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      Thanks xLostxLoverx. Again, thanks for the advice.
  • Arjuna-
    October 12
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    I like the imagery here. I always thought of a willow tree as something sad. Well done.

  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 9

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    Beauty

    This captured nature dying quite well. I loved reading this. I think willows are beautiful trees. Great Haiku. yours in poetry, gypsy
  • trekkergirl silver member
    October 9

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    short but very creative and you use imagery well with colors and giving the clue that the tree in crying. Good job

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