For days before the deed was done
The masked marauder stalked the night
Inspiring fear in everyone
A dreadful sight
The secret mission underway
No-one will dare to interfere
With cloak and dagger is the way
That much is clear
With evil laughter all the while
And manic screams to chill the blood
He wears the most unfriendly smile
We cry a flood
And then the time has come for all
To do the things he's told them to
So answer to his rousing call
H B to you!!!
A contest entry
- kiwigirljacks - Brithday celebrations! by LadyDementia.
1750 points, ended October 13, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Love the darkness in this, chilling air to it
Fantastic birthday wish! Flow and rhyme are as ever spot on. Thanks for entering and good luck
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He sounds scary!!! No wonder he got you all to do his bidding with that call!!!
This is cool as!!!! Thanks so much!
*runs from the marauder screaming*
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Is this a particular form?
I like it. Nicely rhymed.
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'All because the lady loves Milk Tray' - nice one
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Well should of known.
Take care.
Passionspromise
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