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IN FULL BLOOM by efhjr.

IN FULL BLOOM (c) Copyright 2008 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from MUTINY ON 'THE LITTLE STAR' coming SOON!)

"SHIVER ME OLD TIMBERS!
'is what the bellboy said,
when he saw me Rosalie,
jumping on me bed -

with JoAnna and Jetleena,
Miss Vickie and Michelle,
and an erotic actress,
who begged us not to tell.

For now, I'll call her Melody,
to keep her safe and sound,
she's a hop, a skip, and a jump away,
and will soon be going down -

down to the shoreline,
to skinny dip with me,
on Nirvana Island,
singing a chanty -

filled with joy and laughter,
a bawdy sailors' song,
about an ancient harbor,
a safe port in a storm -

where there are friendly taverns,
and ladies by the score,
and every chap is welcomed,
behind an unlocked door -

where every man's the captain,
of his own destiny,
and every woman's sensual,
as sweet as Melody.

"SHIVER ME OLD TIMBERS,
THIS WATER'S BLOODY COLD!"
is what I said to Melody,
who had a heart of gold -

dangling from her nipples,
her belly and her nose,
that glimmered in the sun,
as she struck a pose -

that had this sailor howling,
like a werewolf at the moon,
as she sang an old sea chanty,
beside me in full bloom.

efhjr.

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  • maralisa gold member
    October 12

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    a fantastic poem earl it must your imagery and rhyme is great you wouldnt catch me in the freezing cold skinny dipping though thank you for sharing my friend take care maralisa


  • onesugar silver member
    October 9

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    Jumping on a bed aye, whatever next...it sounds like a whole heap of fun if you ask me LOL!!! Not too sure about the skinny dipping glad I am on the ship far too cold When it is warmer maybe This has a lovely feel to it, loved the ending...a treat as always.
    Love you ~sugar~ xxx


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 9

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    JoAnna is here with you,
    and we know what to do
    to please a captain at sea
    is to give him what he
    does so wish from you and me.


  • sunshinegirl
    October 9

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    Shiver Me Timbers,

    Earl,

    Well, it sounds like a wonderful, but very cold time for sure! What a great job you did on this one! And now if you don't mind, it is time for something to warm this old girl up

    and love

    Nyetta