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After The Storm

The waves crash together in a pointless war,
Thunder shouts,
Down the rain pours.

The waves swing high, and over my head,
Help me,
I’m drowning, its drowning me dead.


Once again my tears are lost to the rain,
Nothing more,
But to be drenched in my pain.

I’m so numb; I can’t move my lifeless form,
No more sorrow,
It’s gone, after the storm.

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  • queen Greeters member
    October 11

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi xxMidnight-Dreamerxx

    I like this, the background adds to it i think well done poet please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • xxBloodyKissesx
    October 10
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    Ohh, wow, I love it.
    Great job!