Is this me ?
I look at my self in the mirror,
I hate what I see.
I look at my wrist their covered in scars,
Im angry and upset I just want to be free.
No one understands me,
they don’t understand how i feel.
They’ve hurt me so many times,
this time when I cut I wont let them heal.
My eyes are always blood shot,
I'm forever wiping away tears.
I feel like I'm forever screaming out in pain,
It feels like no one listening or cant they even hear.
I want to show my lover,
show her what she making me do.
She her the pain she conflicting on me,
when she tells me her and her gf are back together after saying that there threw.
I don’t know how to deal with it,
I cant stand all this pain.
I slowly slice my wrist,
as I stand crying in the rain.
I’m hurt and sad and want to be alone,
I want nothing to do with my lover anymore.
I want to end this all tonight,
I want to bleed to death and fall to the floor.
So I take my knife,
My only true friend in this place.
I cut my wrist it pours out blood,
no one will miss me i will just be one less person in the human race.
what do think? what make it sound stupid? were can i fix it?
Comments
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this is welll done
i love how you don't care about sexuality
and i love the line I feellike I'm forever screaming out in pain,
It feels like no one listening or cant they even hear.
your poem stll has a cuting theme but it is morwe suttel than befor
the bit tha gets you pont across is when she tells me her and her gf are back together after saying that there threw.
I dont know how to deal with it,
I cant stand all this pain.
I slowly slice my wrist,
as I stand crying in the rain.
Im hurt and sad and want to be alone,
I want nothing to do with my lover anymore.
I want to end this all tonight,
I want to bleed to death and fall to the floor.
So I take my knivfe,
My only true friend in this place.
I cut my wrist it pours out blood,
no one will miss me i will just be one less person in the human race.
now i am bi but i go more for boys i dont no why
if you want to talk more about cutting or anything just ask and i will send u my msn
love ronynxx
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hi
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