My sweet innocent sister
but I am afraid you'll tell
about our dirty, little secret
So, understand, I must kill you
We had such a good thing going
until my worst of fears set in
and I don't want to be in trouble
or be a mockery from other people
The first night you let me cum in you
was the first night we'd ever had sex
We always made sure everyone was asleep
when I entered you, you bit your pillow
Let's do this, like we've always done it
discreetly, please don't cry, sweety
I wish it wouldn't come to this, my sis
I'll fuck you softly, and kill you swiftly
No one will be home for hours, girl
pull down your panties and give it to me
You can moan out my name, if you want
let's get down and dirty, this time
Their is a twist to this sadistic tale
one, I'm sure you didn't see coming
but just as I came, she yelled out my name
then stuck a knife deep into my back
In a list
A contest entry
- Horror Be Thy Name by Amber Rose.
800 points, ended October 15, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Friday Fun :) by Starz of Heaven.
550 points, ended October 10, 18 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Loved it. <3
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Very dynamic poem and justice was served at the end!!!
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Oh my gos, I absolutely love this - WELL DONE I'm very impressed!!!
~*~DramaQueen469~*~
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oh wow that was a little sick and twisted but it was a pretty good poem
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Oh my word
This is something that I do not read much of but you did a great job goodluck to you in my contest be well
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i lloves this shidd..i ownz..i love this..
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wow thats really intesnce.
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Ha! Talk about backfired plans! Great take on my prompt! Could have been more imagery but an awesome story nonetheless! Thank you for your entry!
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Haha awesome! Great twist. Love it.
Great work.
Dani.
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