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Haiku for Thursday October 9th 2008








auburn leaves falter
and cower to loaded winds
tumbling like bank shares










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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 22

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    Nice

    well this is certainly a very strong well penned poem and I really love the over all depth flow and ebauty to your wording you use. anyw ays just a really great write and keep up the good work


  • Patpowersnoshoepoet
    October 12
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    Good work Kezz! Sort of what is happening right now in this world. THANKS!!


  • marc creamore
    October 11
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    Oh so well done bro, this is absolute truth captured in a few short words . . . TIMELY!!!!!


  • no win no fee
    October 11
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    I wish I could write Haiku but it always alludes me. This is lovely. x