Nothing more
Nothing less
Just friends
You hurt me badly
I’ll never forget
The day you said those words
Even now
Every day
I see them in my head
I was not your fault
Nor was it mine
All we really needed
Was time
But we didn’t wait
We didn’t think
About what it could do
To what we had
So here we are
Nothing more
Nothing less....
Just friends
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em........yer wrote this in like 3 mins .... so tell me ur ideas how to improve it....
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Comments
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WOW!
I think this was amazing... I dont really think it needs any changes... I recently said this to my boyfriend for 3 years...
I really dont think its wrong when you dont feel the way you should whenever hes in your arms... I felt like he was holding me back and was never there for me and as time went by the last month, hes really showed me we are better off as...
Just friends
Nothing more
Nothing less
Just friends..
I love that part!!!! Feels like i do right now.. You did a great job in such a little short poem.. but it has so much emotions... Great way of expressing how you feel!!
Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!!!
Shannon*Leah
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Option you chose is needed in your N/A - this is stated in the rules, do this, message me when it is done with the title of your poem and then I will comment on the actual poem.
Rebecca
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This is really good. I can relate to it very much.
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