sweet lilac blossoms
swaying in the gentle breeze
wafts scented kisses
Author notes
dedicated to -LilacThOughts-
Picture from www.mooseyscountrygarden.com
In a list
A contest entry
- Yankee Candle Scents and Wreaths by ea.
600 points, ended October 23, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
I truly love the fragrance of this poem as I could easily feel like I could smell and taste that scent as I was reading your Haiku. furthermore whats impressive is the face you were able to have that effect upon me and thats a good thang anyw ays just a wonderfully penned write and keep up the good work
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wow this is just perfect. I love the color. It matches the color to the flowers. I love the black background too. I love the very short but very well written poem. You use a lot of imagery in the few words that you use. Great job here.
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Lovely. Picturesque and perfect to the topic you so eloquently described. Haiku-bless-you indeed.
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Oh! bro
this is just lovely, you are the most thoughtful person ever, and so surprising 
My absolute favourite partnership in colours, is lilac and black, so this page is beautiful to me, and in particular the lilac blooms...
An expressive haiku, it portrays so much in so few words, thank you my dearest brother and friend
Love and smiles...~Lilac
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Perfect verse for my favorite flower...
This is a big delight in tiny verse.
Blue
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Nice dedication to Lilac Thoughts and well worded. A nice reminder of spring, even though we have to get through all that other stuff first.
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A very special write for a very dear person. A skillfully crafted haiku and lovely presentation. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Excellent AHA moment in line 3. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.
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Oh, what a pretty scent you picked, and a delightful poem for Lilac too! I love the AHA moment, a wonderful haiku.
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That's a very nice dedication to Lilac Thoughts - I am sure she will be pleased.
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So soft and gentle like the tender breeze upon which it floats...lilacs blooming, scent inhaled as beauty washes over...A truly lovly read...Niaish na brother Gray Elk for sharing it with me
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I love lilacs- their beauty and their lovely scent. What a wonderful way to pay tribute to our local lilac poet as well. Wonderful read.
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Aww - I knew that this was a dedication the moment I saw the title
it is lovely! The whole page is very fitting, and it greatly enhances your words that I know who you are talking about 
- I wish you the best in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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