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Taking Flight


shades of blue mesh white
creating nightmares upon sight-
winged beast takes flight

In a list

A contest entry

Picture by whisper

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  • Very Nice

    I like this flow and the over all depth to the piece as well. I mean your ending words per line were unique and has a soft rhythmatic rhyme to it. any ways over all as always Irish this is another beautifully written poem by you and keep up the very good work


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 10
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    Love it! Good luck in the contest, my dear!


  • M. Pinnell
    October 10

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    Awesome! I like Haiku and this is one of the best I ever read. It gets deep into the heart of the darkness. Great write. Pyrate


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 10

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    Very nice haiku and flow in this small form...says so much in so little...nicely creative....
    thank you for entering!
    mystic