shades of blue mesh white
creating nightmares upon sight-
winged beast takes flight
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest 10 entries 10 lines more or less by mysticstorm.
300 points, ended October 11, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Picture by whisper
Comments
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Very Nice
I like this flow and the over all depth to the piece as well. I mean your ending words per line were unique and has a soft rhythmatic rhyme to it. any ways over all as always Irish this is another beautifully written poem by you and keep up the very good work
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Love it! Good luck in the contest, my dear!


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Awesome! I like Haiku and this is one of the best I ever read. It gets deep into the heart of the darkness. Great write. Pyrate

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Very nice haiku and flow in this small form...says so much in so little...nicely creative....
thank you for entering!
mystic





