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Looking at it sideways

lady in a trance
maybe a mysterious dance
- can't tell at a glance





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Picture by whisper

A contest entry

Do you like haikus that rhyme?

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  • summer51
    October 14
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    Why not try the PANTUN?


    summer51

    • ltw222
      October 14
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      Hi summer

      Somehow, I prefer pantuns in Malay. Pantuns in English seem kind of weird to me. Besides, I find the rules of Pantoum here too restrictive and I don't want to start another style here.
      You have read Salleh ben Joned. Do you find any difference especially in the repetition of the lines?

      • summer51
        October 14
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        Yes, pengyou Lee. The one composed by Salleh was like a comparison between the nature/animals/insect and human beings. And hard for me to understand, too cuz more on metaphor.

        I remember the ant and the rose? Something like that.


        summer51

  • summer51
    October 14

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    Are you mastering the HAIKU, pengyou, Lee?

    I like your style.


    summer51


    • ltw222
      October 14
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      Hi summer

      Mastering? I am still studying! Yes, I like to try different styles.

  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 11

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    So very true...really hard to say for sure...that is why I love abstract art...leaves it to each mind to find what they will...nice flow and write...
    thank you for entering!
    mystic
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