stumped
By NealVisher on October 10th 2008, mid-morning.
Freewrite on the topic "Surrounded"
i am ilost in th'woods
i'm surrounded by trees
here a tree, there a tree,
everywhere a tree tree...
here a pea, therapy,
everywhere a pee pee...
if i just stop, drop and roll,
or'f i stop look and listen
like the tree in the morning,
then surely i'll glisten
if i were to become
but a tree in the woods
lost no more i'd be
then it all'd be good
so i'll branch out
i'll flower,
so i blossom
my power
if i were a tree
then not lost would i be
would i pee in the woods
probably, probably
i'd like to thank my tree friends
for welcoming me home
if i fall here, someone will hear it
and at least i'll be happy when i die
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