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To Her,Give Me Time

Instinct blowing heart-song

belief in you but...

Youth took toll,

as tears downpoured

such a tender face.


Wrapped in warmth

of friendship,

buried my feelings

into dark clouds passing.


Words love on concrete

seen only by few,

washed away a smile

you had no right to touch.


My wrath I give

to stormy skies,

for love of you

my feet I plant into ground.


Finding my eyes downcast

my own heart seeking truth,

For you hurt yourself

and one of my own.


Casting thoughts out to no where

holding his heart in your hands.

Break it, take it...


Knowing I loved you both

seen the light between you.

Just give me time

For now I am just human.

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel gold member
    October 10

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    Ooh wows sweetiepie this is so beautiful and flowing with imagery and it had such a good flow just one thing, capitalize your i's to I's because I is a proper noun so must be capitalized. xD your wonderful. and Imma always here for you sissy.
    all my love
    kitty xxxx

  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 10

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    Wrapped in warmth
    of friendship,
    buried my feelings
    into dark clouds passing.

    Loved this stanza! A really awesome piece. I enjoyed it immensely! Good luck in the contest!