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City Life

(in haiku form)

Raindrops on the black
Pavement shimmers in the light
Nature lives here too

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  • Very Nice

    I like the way this write was written. I could visualize all of this taking place around me as if I were walking the streets for sake of argument New York and it was raining heavily and then the sunshine breaks through the rain clouds and thus he pavement was lit up. any ways a genuinely warm well penned haiku that really makes one smile. keep up the good work