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A Poet's Heart

A poet translates what's inner
inscribes then on a page
hoping forever what is written
will live on through time

death and age

there is no thought to reason
it matters not for you to

understand nor comprehend
a poet lives with heart in hand

a compass for direction 

is the heart worn proudly

boldly on a sleeve

a guide to wherever whatever

may be

for most the heart is blind
but not so for the heart of

a true poet

this heart see's what other's 

refuse to see


a traveler and voyager of many seas
voyeur of landscapes unimaginable

a pallette for words
wherever it may wander

or dare to stray

whatever dreams or ventures
words written or not  
the heart of a poet
will always

lead the way

pity the poet's words 

so misunderstood

words that make little sense

to a closed mind
pure and true heart you may mock
laugh at make fun of

point a judging finger

at that which you fail to grasp

a dreamer's imagination
who believes
far out or not from what is the norm 
a poet's heart knows all within

the heart that it breathes 

 

dare to laugh at your failures

numb and dumb to thoughts of

another point of view  

go ahead laugh

at the gift of a poet's heart
but honor the poet you must  
for the poet's heart is free

 

 

 

(c)Nevadapoet

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  • LadCoberst gold member
    October 30
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    This is very good! I can really see myself in this heart you are describing. I enjoy your thoughts here.

    Since you have posted for revision;
    In my opinion the content would have been lifted if you had added/or changed a stanza into "I" form. I miss out on getting to know This poets' heart.

    I like the form of it, it suits the poem; a poet's thoughts of the poety itself.

  • koganei55
    October 30

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    Hmmm...I thought that it seemed to ramble on a bit, and it had a tendency to wax sentimental, but overall it's a good job

  • Emerald Dog
    October 23

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    I wish we were sitting at a table - wine and smokes to hand - you have opened up a conversation that we could talk about forever. Kx


    • nevadapoet
      October 24
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      I would like that very much...hold that thought!!!! Thanks so much for the read and your very welcome comments...they mean the world to me.
      Love ya, Shelly
  • pain in colorado
    October 23
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    Excellent Poem, feels like you have been writing for a while. thank you for the comment on mine.


    • nevadapoet
      October 24
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      Thanks for the read...I have been writing for a while, it is only as of late that I have begun to take it more seriously.

      I appreciate your comments. Visit again.
      Shelly
  • Lost Luggage
    October 18

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    I clicked on a featured item which I don't care to comment on, but owing you a comment chose this piece instead.

    My first reaction after a couple of rereads is that the poem is fine in most respects but I find the very first two lines phonetically clumsy...

    "A poet translates what's inner
    inscribes then on a page
    hoping forever what is written
    will live on through time
    death and age"

    Should that be:

    "A poet translates what's [in her (and)]
    inscribes [them] on a page
    hoping forever what is written
    will live on through time
    death and age"

    That's the only grammatic sense I can make out of those two lines. Is there a typo there or is that really the words you want?

    Perhaps I'm just guilty of:
    "it matters not for you to
    understand nor comprehend
    a poet lives with heart in hand"

    The rest of it scans well.




    • nevadapoet
      October 24
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      Sorry you happened upon the wrong poem for your tastebuds. The first stanza...is writen correctly...a poet translates what's inner (on the inside) and then puts it to paper.
      this write was a rambling of thoughts...not meant for all to love...but fo me to say.
      Thanks for the comments and for the read...I do appreciate it.
      Shelly

  • Dalaney gold member
    October 10

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    Shelly...I think you've
    penned something very very
    special here. You touched
    me. Love, Lane


    • nevadapoet
      October 10
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      Glad you enjoyed...the ramblings of a misunderstood poet. Thanks for reading...I always appreciate your point of view.
      Always,
      Shelly

  • Cannonsfire gold member
    October 10

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    It's funny but a poet to me is one who by some means always tells the truth, whether it be of love and how they view it or of life and society and how the world needs strong poets to write the wrongs (if you pardon the pun) C


    • nevadapoet
      October 10
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      That is the poet...write the wrongs with words. Thanks for reading...glad you enjoyed.
      Always,
      Shelly

  • spilt ink
    October 10

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    Great Great Great!!!!!

    That was SOOOO good I haven't been on the site lately and it feels so good to read poems that speak what I've wanted to say so BADLY. Great job and keep it up. S. I.


    • nevadapoet
      October 10
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      Thank you so much for the read and for joining us again. I appreciate your very welcome comments.
      Shelly
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