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me

I may not be pretty
I may not be sweet
I may not be who you want me to be
But I'm not a phony,
I don't wear a mask
I know who I am
so suck it up

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  • emogallhatu
    October 12

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    dang i really!!!!! like this one and its just a wow. i really just love it!!!!!!!!!!!! i like "i know who i am so suck it up" go lena!!!

  • superstition
    October 10

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    I think that you made your point loud and clear within this penning, and the qualities you brought out about yourself in this are worth hanging onto. We don't need to change ourselves for anybody...perhaps we can revise ourselves a little bit...but not change ourselves. After all, there's going to be those people who love us just as we already are, and when you find them, you found those worth living for. Nice writing.

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    October 10

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Good for you!
    It is wonderful to read a poem with strength and confidence as you know who you are and are not ashamed of it

    Great write
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