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Poetry in the Heart

Destiny, my friend,
Poetry deep in her heart,
Writing all her dreams.

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Poetry in the Heart is a haiku (5, then 7, then 5 syllables.) it's dedicated to AutumnSpice.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 22
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    Beautiful

    Awww such a deep heart felt beautiful tribute to a girl you love and care about. I am sure she will love this coming from you. any ways over all this is an incredible write for a haiku and I like how you punctuated it and also how it all comes together. any ways good work all round and keep up the good work


  • Autumn Sparrow silver member
    October 19

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    Lovely haiku, thank you for writing this about me, although my name is no longer NatureGirl... I really love it!!!!!!!!!

  • AnGeL WiNgS
    October 14

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    oh wow

    i like your sence of writing you have amazing tallent and thats a good thing sweety, keep your dreams open and go for what you want in life!!!!! again love it
  • The Fun House gold member
    October 12
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    Such a deep and profound thought here. Yet again you have written a very meaningful haiku, well done, I am in awe as I have never even attempted one.
    I really enjoyed yours.