Glossy coal-black wings.
Silent creature of the night.
Shadowy raven.
What is your favourite part? What would you change or improve?
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Oh straight off the bat I really love the title of the piece and now I really love that last line as it really sets this Haiku into motion and creates incredible imagery built through out the poem. any ways really love the depth beauty and flow to it. I concure with the poet below beautiful punctuation and just excellent work. keep it up
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Very nice description of a raven Coriander...
Some one told me that you don't need punctuation in a haiku though!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!
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you did a good job and it was deep keep writing
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Ah yes... Impressive. You're really getting on well. I tried to find a better word for shadowy but I can't find anything. Keep up the Great work!
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oh this is lovely.
I think it captures the raven very well. I have never been able to write haiku's myself, I think I will have to start taking lessons.
Well done, I really liked this.
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