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Time Stands Still

Sometimes I think it's all a dream,
When you are right here next to me,
Holding my hand and saying sweet things,
In my ear.

You're always here to protect me,
To love and lead and guide me,
Into your arms where I can be me,
And drown my fears.

And I can't imagine a day without you,
Just hoping and praying the day will be through,
So you could come back and I could love you,
So I could wipe away my tears.

Can I tell you just one more time,
That without a reason or rhyme,
That when I'm with you I just don't feel the time,
And your voice is all that I hear.

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