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Strange Redemption

synonyms fail when
i've run out of words to call
you, and your ego

which burst and bubbles
out, not unlike a volcano
destroying a town

with little regard
for the townsfolk and their kids
who run with pitchforks

and slang, to swallow
you whole, bad intentions and
all, till your naked

and knocking, on the
doors of those you wronged, who will
string you up by your

multiple masked
deceptions, cracking and peel-
ling, and bringing change

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  • Very Nice

    Well this write certainly opens eyes to the simplistic natureism to this write. furthermore the over all quality to this write is quite impressive as well. anyw ays love the depth beauty and down right interesting complexing this write is. any ways excellent work from one stanza to another and keep up the good work


    • Amergin
      October 22
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      Thanks for reading so much of my work, I really appreciate it!