It was always your job
to get the milk,
but now you're gone
it's black coffee -
blue morning.
A contest entry
- no line or word limit here by Gypsy Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 11, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good
You say a lot with just a few words. This one suggests a sad story--of loss and lonliness.
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patrick
Thankyou for your comments and for your very generous applause.
With best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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Very well thought out in so few words... x
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G P
Thankyou for reading and for your complimentary comment.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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