As you spoke
those simple words
rage became me
my mind was blank
I screamed
I howled
I said what I did not
ever wish to reveal.
In my fit
I could not think
and my goblet
I threw at you
though it missed
and fell to the floor
not only the glass
but also your heart
shattered upon
unforgiving stone.
Now you’re gone
and there is nothing
left for me to do
but kneel here and cry
my tears falling
upon the ground
and to slowly drown
in my memories of you.
Author notes
based of the quote..
"A tear, a tear. I cried. A glass, a glass. I smashed. A heart, a heart. I broke." - J. M. Spenser
A contest entry
- Many Few Random Prompt Options Contest by No longer in use.
600 points, ended October 23, 12 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical reviews please! I want to make this better...
Comments
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ok seriously, why am i even enterint that contest? he's my hubby so i feel obligated, but idk if i can write better than this!
ing alone,
Mylee -
Awesome. This is nicely done. Exquisite, excellent, wonderful and all other synomyns.
Well done keep the good writing up. Love it. Bah Dah Dut Da Dah
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