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Endlessly

 

 

Endless love by millzero.com.

 

 

When you hold me in your arms,

and softly whisper my name.

When you place your hand on my heart,

and tell me yours beats the same.

 

It's like being lost in Heaven,

when I look into your eyes.

Every time we are together,

I find another wonderful reason why.

 

I surrender my heart to you,

all that I have deep within.

I would die to be with you wherever you are,

to fall in love with you all over again.

 

You are the shooting star high above,

that lights my darkest and loneliest night.

Just seeing you and being at your side,

fills my heart with endless delight.

 

On this beautiful summer afternoon,

beneath the sun and endless clouds above.

I pledge myself and all of my heart,

to the one that I will always love.

 

I promise to be there for you,

to provide for you and catch you when you fall.

I'll be the one to reassure your heart,

and make sure that we get through it all.

 

When times are rough and seem uncertain,

just know that you can always count on me.

You'll always be first on my mind and in my heart,
I will love and adore you, endlessly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Surrender...
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  • this is exactly how i feel with the guy in my life right now...it amazing that someone else can say it better then i can. this is a wonderfun write...i love reading wat you write..i always have and i always will

  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 12

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    Such a beautiful honest and open piece, every womens wish to hear this! Stunning emotions, very well penned, good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 11

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    This is really beautiful!! What every woman would want to hear from her man. You've made it tender and heartfelt.. just wonderful!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 11
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    Sincere, sentimental, and romantic verses rhyme and flow excellent....A choice poem!


  • Katie Lazette
    October 11
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    A beautiful poem and beautifully written Jeremy. Good luck in the contest. Katie

  • Arjuna-
    October 11
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    Beautifully done! Such sweetness...

    Good luck!

  • ishelicious
    October 11
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    wow so nice ...very romantic ...hehhee...inlove? keep up the good work!!!! *clap* clap* clap* hehe

  • KayJay silver member
    October 10

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    A wonderfully warm and tender write... you have a delicate touch here that reaches out and makes the ladies sigh and guys jealous Excellent form and flow and a beautiful story.
    Ken


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 10

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    This is simply beautiful, again you best stop writing for me j/k this is a really sweet piece. One of your best, thanks for linking me hun, it made my night.

    Love
    Passions


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 10

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    This is so beautiful and the picture with this write was like WOW!!!!! You always amaze me with your writes
    You are the shooting star high above,
    that lights my darkest and loneliest nights.
    Just seeing you and being at your side,
    fills my heart with endless delight.

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