leave’s soft sashay
lazily lay lifeless, yet
tango to the wind
A contest entry
- Seasonal " Haiku's" by wingsofgold25.
600 points, ended October 16, 46 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Awesome
Oh this definitely deserved the HM trophy you received as it is just incredible all round. I just really love the over all depth flow and beauty to this write. I also really love the way this was penned and the incredible depth imagery and flow through out this write. any ways excellent work all round with the incredible methaphorical useage throughout this write and the deep picture one conjures up upon reading this haiku. keep up the good work
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The trees to dance the beat of natures kiss.
And as the leaves we fall!
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A very beautifully worded piece! very seasonal.
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absolutely love this hearttangles. this is flawlessly beautiful. really pretty.
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A very nice Haiku good description of Autumn Nice Pic. also.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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Oooooo!
The autumn leaves are drifting & dancing by my window!
I love this. Nice job on the background & pix also. 
Hope you do well in the contest!
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Very nice. You have subtly captured the feeling of Fall's leafy dance. My favorite time of the year.
Good luck...Michael
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Excellent, you are the Queen of Haiku`s. I try, but never seem to fly off the keyboard. Only float off into space, that neverland of unknowns. Success in this contest, lots of competition.lol.
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