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with open arms (tá sí ceanúil air, tá sí geal dó)

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i want you unfettered
no single chain on your heart
the nakedness of soul
you bring yourself to me

take this body
who lies here
unrestrained

caress the points
each one more supple
from the need of your kiss

not your shadowed desire
i yearn to be inside your light
beside the man who breathes for me
traverses each moment on my skin
such gentle hands placed

journey to the inner core
where heat is felt
tumultuous and growing
to hear your sigh
your head against my spine

such surrender is this
the subtle arrogance i possess
to please all that you are

with all i am allowed to give
these open arms




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  • CaliOkie silver member
    October 15

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    Sensual and touching you have created a work of beauty. Very moving with such gentle loving words.

    Congrats on silver.

    Garrison


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 12

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    Wow, superbly penned! Such passion portrayed, excellent read, good luck


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    October 11

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    Simply beautiful my friend!
    I hope that you do well with this
    one in the contest. Good luck!




    Jeremy0826

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 11

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    Beautiful! Such passion and giving in this. Sigh.. I wish to give all that myself..

    Wonderful!


  • marc creamore
    October 11

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    First of all, how in the hell can I keep up with you these days . . . my god, you are as prolific as a pollen starved bee . . . Secondly, I love seeing the gaelic, even though I cannot speak it myself . . . and thirdly, this is a soft, sensual poem of longing . . . may the arms of some wild Irish poet grab hold of you and satisfy your every need, both biologically and spiritually . . .

    peace, sister,
    Marc


    • Cannonsfire gold member
      October 11
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      Just a wild Irish rose here but perhaps not able to be tamed completely Marc

  • Cannonsfire gold member
    October 11
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    <

    A lot to give if anyone is taking?? C

  • KayJay silver member
    October 10
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    And just to back up my words...


    • Cannonsfire gold member
      October 10
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      Thanks KJ nd btw your avatar is one of my all time favorite movies

  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 10

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  • KayJay silver member
    October 10

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    I like your take on this I guess your pleasure could be form of surrender (Just teasing... looking forward to reading you FINAL words... best of luck)
    Ken

    • Cannonsfire gold member
      October 10
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      lol all done

      • KayJay silver member
        October 10
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        I see my comment wasn't too far off A wonderfully sensual and loving write full of beautiful images and caring emotions... Pure excellence, young lady...
        Ken
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