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The Deal

I normally write what i feel,
But in this poem, I'll make you a deal.
Caring and honesty are some traits you show,
You a beacon to others, just thought you should know.

The compassion and love that you share,
Lets us know that people still care.
I will show up and sit in the back,
Because of the faith i lack.

We are the ones that are misunderstood.
Nothing we try ever does any good.
Why label someone? Labels are for soup cans,
So why put one on a man?

I apologize for the griping,
But,honestly, what you are asking me to do is frighting.

Please tell me what you think

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  • xXmiranda-maeXx
    October 14

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    i really like this one, i think it's one of your best, great job... i really loved the line "the campassion and love that you share, lets us know that people still care."