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Forgive Me For Remembering

I cried tonight,
Remembering your face above mine,
How I could stare straight into your eyes,
And still smile even though...

I remember your hair encircling our faces,
Its wavy locks I treasured,
I think about the night you asked me to do something,
Something I had never done before,
I was too scared to give in,
Now I wish I would have done it,
So I could cherish that memory of us,
Like I do so many others.

I wish I could transport myself back there,
And lay above you so I could look in your eyes,
Give you control,
That your hands wrapped around my wrist signifies,
The golden light across your face would entrance me,
Like the curve of your lips so often did,
And I would inwardly churn with you inside me.


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  • Artless gold member
    October 11
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    God, that's uncomfortable to read.