words evade lips sewed shut,
secrets burning on covered skin,
see the pain lurking in her eyes?
dont let the smile upon her face fool you,
shes decaying on the inside.
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my emotions are overwhelming and no one in my life understands
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Wow! Quite frankly I'm speechless. In so few lines, you packed so much emotion into your words. This piece is strong and heart-wrenching.
"shes decaying on the inside."
perfect ending! great well written piece! I would applaud this even more if I could. lol
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wow! this is such a powerful poem!!! i'm so sorry, but you can talk to me anytime keep the faith alive
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short.... BUT VERY POWERFUL!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!
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thank you
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-secrets burning on covered skin.
and with that line, i fell.
what a beautiful tragedy this poem is. so short, so powerful, so heart-breaking.
the way you weave words leaves me (yet again) in complete awe.
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very powerful..i know how it is to have overwhelming emotions and yet you keep up a smile
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