chained
to world
that moves on
without you
restless
and lost
you spirit
remains
these halls
filled with
comfort
allure you within
your essences
unrested
a murder
unsolved
hauntingly
beautiful
in a unmarked
named grave
trapped
to a place
your memories
once lived
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie Pic Prompt by Carolina Moon.
450 points, ended October 11, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awesome
Hi sweetheart
Wow, you have penned here a wonderful write.It is an excellent take on the picture prompt.Your words are easily understood and tells the story so well.It was like watching a movie being played in frount of my eyes.I think this should of taken the gold but, hey, that's only my oppinion!
You have been a pleasure to read, and I send to you much love and happiness.
your angel friend in poetry,
Angel-anne.
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thank you my heart
as always your words fill me with such comfort and hope.....your kindness is something rarely found.....you are a true friend to me and my heart always.....
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Wonderful take on the prompt. Well done! Thank you for your entry.
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thank you
as always your comments mean a great deal to me.....i so enjoy writing for your contest's......you always bring forward my insperation with your wonderful prompts
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