i still remember the morning
on that late February
when i first saw your eyes
and you first saw me
that look on your face
when you step of that bus
one smile, one touch
it captured my heart
A contest entry
- #3 PIF/Prompt by katzeyez.
600 points, ended October 12, 8 entries
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Comments
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Oh nice take on the prompt.You fell like those petals when you saw him. Lovely!
You're third last line 'when you step of that bus', did you mean 'when you stepped off that bus'?
That's how I read this in my mind.
Thank you and good luck.
Katz xx
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