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They kissed

Black and  White picture of couple kissing passionately

She wasn't looking out for love, but then she saw his jeans
    Stretched tight across the spot that drew her eyes
He wasn't ready to commit until he saw the means
    To get a closer look at lovely thighs
They met they talked of this and that of all the friends they missed
And then that summer by the sea they kissed and kissed and kissed

Her hair fell down between the boards her hands fell on his hips
    While he fell hard and fast beneath her spell
He lost, she lost, they lost control, they lost themselves in lips
    They wrote the tale that they both love to tell
The years, the lives, the summer days have passed but are not missed
For every day since first they met they've kissed and kissed and kissed

They knew they'd part at summer's end when each would travel home
    Instead they stayed and summer left instead
They found that lips and thighs and hips had quelled the need to roam
    They stayed and made the plans of how they'd wed
So long ago it seemed a dream, their families were missed
But better than the lives they left they kissed and kissed and kissed

It would not last, her Father said, his Mother said the same
    But now two families are joined as one
The summer love that grew and grew became the only game
    And both of them were playing it for fun
For thirty years they've lived and loved and nothing much is missed
His Mum, her Dad met at the Church, and kissed and kissed and kissed...




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Sorry rather wandered off the contest theme here!

But it sort of write itself

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  • Woodchuck4400 silver member
    October 15

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    Nice job. Great rhyme and flow as I have come to expect when I read your works. Excellent story as well.

    Mike


  • Deceits Tears
    October 12

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    A very enjoyable read, Thankyou for your entry
    All the best

  • Angels Whispers gold member
    October 11

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    Hi there dear poet,
    A wonderful story told.I like to read a long write as it gives more depth into the story its self,well that's my oppinion anyway Lol.You started off being sensual and then wandered off the theme! .... oh well it was still a great read anyway I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Much love and happiness to you,
    Angel-Anne


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 11

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    Yea. Well penend. Great to have this kind of love isnt it?

    ahhh well, I had to come and look and read and read and read.

    as usual you took it and ran. I should of known.

    Much luck to you in the contest

    Passion