I can feel myself getting weaker,
Can't even think of what I live for.
Trying so hard to keep an unpained face,
No matter what, you think of me as a disgrace.
Will you be there for me?
I don't know what it is you want to see.
You are all that is left of me,
I'm so numb, I can't feel the love I recieve.
Don't let me fall yet..you're all I have.
Please switch feelings..Can't take the leaving.
Take my final wish..Dont care what you do with it.
There's nothing left to say..Today's the day.
Can't take much more of this,
The things you do,
They can't be missed.
When you laugh in my face,
Think of the breath you just wasted.
Wondering of all the things that died,
Trying to forget all the lies.
Dont tell me it takes time.
Don't let me fall yet..you're all I have.
Please switch feelings..Can't take the leaving.
Take my final wish..Dont care what you do with it.
There's nothing left to say..Today's the day.
Nothing left to miss..This was my Final Wish.
Don't let me fall yet..This is my final wish
You're all I have left..It's my final switch.
Please switch feelings..Can't take the leaving.
Take my Final Wish..Final wish
Don't care what you do with it.
Nothing left to say..What about today?
It's my Final Wish...
Final thing to say,
I wished you loved me,
Loved me for who I wanted to be.
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Comments
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Powerful and intense. Your use of vocabulary was spot on and provided ample room for the reader to apply personal interpretation and perspective. You could feel the sadness and frustration in the moments you captured, which is what writing is all about. Greeat work I enjoyed it.


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Pretty good!
I agree with the last commenter, i really enjoy the last line. I think you did a good with this poem. Its written well. -
cool i really enjoyed this espically the last line,well done!



