Standing in lost moments
longing for the courage
to step forward till she
reached the other side,
where her freedom lay
she would never turn back
burn the path behind,
leaving old memories to fall
unable to find her,
and she would forget,
allowing herself to
live once more.
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PROMPT 2: crossing the bridge
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this was a great take on the prompt. I liked how you didn't actually mention 'crossing the bridge' but rather it was implied. that was well done.
nicely written.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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Excellent
A terrific take on the prompt. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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That search we all wish for in life
the pain of past lay on one side of the bridge
The other side taking us onwards.
Beautifully written hun
Best wishes
Julie
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many of us have had to cross that bridge and start again
this has great meaning
hugs Moony
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It is so hard sometimes to leave the past behind and move on, especially when something we love is there. You are a marvel kindred spirit
love to you. Always the best to you in the contest
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Beautifully Penned
I love this piece. It brings to mind someone pulling themselves out of a depression and finding the inner strength and courage to go on. Bravo!!!gypsy
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Oh wow.
I don't know what to say
besides
you better win.
♥
-Rainbow.
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