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to my attempted puppeteer

You would have me be your clone
A replica, with mouth stitched shut
Following you like a shadow
Following you, with blind eyes shut

But I'm not my sister, not your slave
I haven't got those puppet strings
I am not now, nor in my grave
I have a voice, and it shall sing

And as these tears fall from my eyes
blood droplets from my wrists
I have to now, just realize
I'll never be good enough for you

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  • very powerful...

    assimilating yourself to meet the "requirements" is never a desirable thing to do...you've painted a very vivid picture of what a hell it truly can be

    well done


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 15

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    wow..that was a powerful write....
    obviously..your heart and pen....will never be stitched
    tight!
    WE CELEBRATE YOUR Fearless might and bold courage
    to write this poem!
    WOW!
    ears/Seattle
    welcome to the finalist list!