I am entranced as I watch you move
unconscious of observation
the slight curve of your neck
part hidden by a curtain
of silken hair
left long by convenience
rather than art or intention
the edge of your collar bone
deliciously revealed
by your open collar
as you change position
Elegant fingers flow from hands
both large and warm
An artist or musician perhaps
You smile easily
In contemplation and conversation
sensuous mouth expressive, eyes alight
as your thoughts and feelings change
About you is a sense of ease
unhindered by ego
and unaware of how you charm and entice
I cannot help but smile as I walk away
A contest entry
- grace by serval.
300 points, ended October 19, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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very descriptive, which is nice. but theres not much enderneath it. it kind of leaves the prompt behind by not reflecting on itself.
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